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Lindy,
Are you writing this stupid YPL essay? I've tried, several times, but what I've come up with sounds like utter rubbish. It's supposed to make it sound like I'm not a blood-traitor--you know, going on about how the Lord Protector made it possible for us to live by true purebred precepts at last, and rot like that. But it sounds just so, I dunno, stiff. Unconvincing as can be.
Could look it over for me? You're a much better writer than I am. Don't know if I have enough time to start all over yet again if you think I have to begin from scratch. But at least you might be able to talk me through some ideas.
Or tell me if it's utterly hopeless.
Are you writing this stupid YPL essay? I've tried, several times, but what I've come up with sounds like utter rubbish. It's supposed to make it sound like I'm not a blood-traitor--you know, going on about how the Lord Protector made it possible for us to live by true purebred precepts at last, and rot like that. But it sounds just so, I dunno, stiff. Unconvincing as can be.
Could look it over for me? You're a much better writer than I am. Don't know if I have enough time to start all over yet again if you think I have to begin from scratch. But at least you might be able to talk me through some ideas.
Or tell me if it's utterly hopeless.